Critique please

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by JimmyAtlantis, Apr 12, 2007.

  1. JimmyAtlantis

    JimmyAtlantis TPF Noob!

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    and thank you.

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  2. (Ghastly) Krueger

    (Ghastly) Krueger TPF Noob!

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    I like the texture of the garlic skin and the overall tone of the image.

    I would have used a bit more DOF to get both heads in focus, crop a bit wider to get them complete and look for a simlpe background (of the same tones).
     
  3. MonteMama

    MonteMama Calmer than you, Dude.

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    I had the same thought, a little bit more in focus. I think I'd try b&w, too.
     
  4. deggimatt

    deggimatt No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I think it would be better if you move the other onions back a little bit so they go more out of focus... so the small onion will catch my eye more.
     
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    Agree with the above. A bit of each is in focus, if this was intentional then well done. Peronsally i would have one in focus and use the DOF to background the other
     

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