critique plzzz

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  1. outlandishogle

    outlandishogle TPF Noob!

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    tell me what you guys think.
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    The first one is kinda bland because that butterfly is not interesting. I wish it had more color.

    Very vibrant colors on the second one but composition wise it's too centered

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    I like both of them sharp and nice colors, for my taste i think #1 is the best
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    thanks for the input. i like #2 and i know its centered but i thought the bee kind of off set it a bit.
     
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    I think he was going for contrast in the first one. I like it just because its like the yellow flower represents light and the black -- almost bat looking butterfly represents one of hells angels. Im going too far into this, but tell me by the shape of its wings, you couldnt see this thing in a horror movie.

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    Well I really like the 1st one very crisp and strong colours, the 2nd one is ok but just doesn't have the same impact

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    The shadows on the first shot are what seems to ruin it.
     

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