critique these for me?

[kayayles]

http://dailybooth.com/kkayayless/6177509

http://dailybooth.com/kkayayless/6177460

 

[Robin Usagani]

why dont you pick your favorite 10 and post it here. Nobody is going to critique you.

[edit]
I get it now. YOu want us to critic those 2 pics. I think #74 is better. You need to adjust your wb i think. Too blue in web and water part.

 

[Morpheuss]

number 74 looks pretty cool like looking up from the grass into a web the 75 i think would look better if you raised the camera above the blades of grass that are right infront of the lens making it look alittle blurry

 

[KmH]

You will get more responses if you POST the photos.
http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/...forum-functions-pictoral-guide-using-tpf.html

I agree with the comments you have gotten so far.

Both photos are monochromatic and quite busy. Check out some info on composition:

List of photographic composition techniques - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Composition_(visual_arts)

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

I think #74 is better. You need to adjust your wb i think. Too blue in web and water part.

Agreed... I took the liberty of adjusting the White Balance a bit...

Original...

My edit...

I know they are very similar... But I think you can see the difference.