critique this junkyard?

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  1. lacij

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    just took these yesterday, not sure if the exposure is correct but are they okay anyways?

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    thanks so much guys
     
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    Well it's a little hard to give specific critique when there is more than one picture to critique. However, in general... I think that the pictures are all over-exposed and/or have the contrast set too high that makes a lot of the pictures highlights blown (too white). Also most of them have more than one object in the picture that is in focus (too busy) leaving the viewer's eye a question of "what am I supposed to be focusing on/looking at?"
     
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    way way way to contrasty, it looks like you shot this on lith film or somthing.
     
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    Oh my I got excited at the title of this thread but I to agree with the other posts , the worst thing I noticed was they're all blurry (not a good blur).
    Were you trying for a certain effect?
     
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    Old cars going to the crusher makes me sad :(
     
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    The constrast is way too high in #1, but in the others, it's not that bad. It actually reminds me of APX100.
     
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    I think the high contrast on the first one adds to the image. but i do think that they are all slightly overexposed
     
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    i TRIED to fix some of them...

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    did i fix them or just make them worse?
    thank you all so much
     
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    the contrast was too high it was making my eyes hurt to lok t the screen

    in the post above mine i will say #3 is much better then it was before. i find the content in the other ones too cluttered so (for me) it des nothing compositionally. and number 3 kind of bugs me tht the picture is crooked
     
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    the high contrast is good, but its a bit too over exposed, i personally dont like how close you taken the shots either, very little too look at
     

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