Critiques requested!

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  1. danyi03

    danyi03 TPF Noob!

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    Hi there! This is my first post here. I'm starting a new website of for cars and car-events. I had two photo-shoots already, here are the photos of the first one and I'd like you to comment my work and give me some advice on how to improve it.

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    Please let me know everything that pops in your mind about these photos!
     
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  2. crimbfighter

    crimbfighter No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    They look good for the most part, but if you want good C&C from the more experienced folks on here I would suggest significantly reducing the number of photos by at least half, or make two separate threads and break them up. It's too cumbersome to to keep scrolling up that far and remembering which photos are which.

    Trust me, you will get a lot better comments and critiques, and less angry TPFers, if there are not so many photos to go through. In fact, many will simply overlook the thread because there are two many. More than 5 or 6 photos severely hurts your chances for C&C. edit your post and you'll have better success.
     
  3. sovietdoc

    sovietdoc TPF Noob!

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    i like the shadows on #8

    Could almost black out the city lights and it would be slightly better imo
     

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