Crouching Dragons

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  1. matthew robertson

    matthew robertson TPF Noob!

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    Trying to capture a mood / slice of life.
     
  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Hmph ---- weeeellllll.
    Whose mood?
    Slice of life of whom?

    That person to the very, very, EXTREME right could stand for the mood/slice of life aspect, if only he weren't almost pushed out of the frame. I think this would be a great photo if he had only been JUST inside the red, erm, whatever-it-is-thing.
    My thoughts (not even worth 2 cents...)
     
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    Hate to say this, but for my 2 cents worth I think the slice-of-life might be better if the dragons on top were cropped out. The way the photo is now, I don't know whether to look at the dragons or the street scene. But when I scroll the dragons off my screen, I really like the street scene.
     
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    For the title of the the ic you should have just got the dragons.

    I agree with BLS on the cropping to get the mood.

    Just my .02.
     

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