Cute little girl portrait. C&C

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  1. ghache

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    Those are pretty sweet good job! Did you use natural lighting?

    Also #1 looks like the active focus point is on the lips, was that intentional?
     
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    That was not intentional, i only had 3 choice:lol:, i was shooting with a D60 and the camera only has 3 focus points.
     
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    #4 all the way!
     
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    Cute kid.

    1. In addition to the point of focus being off I think the DOF is too narrow. The far eye is more sharp while the near eye is OOF. I would like to see at least the near eye in sharp focus.

    2. Your reflection in the eyes is bugging me. The catchlights in both #2 and 3 are busy and scattered.

    3. Too soft and the light on the top left of the kid's head looks haphazard. Makes it a snapshot.

    #1 is my favorite but I really wish the fore face were more crisp.
     
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    Very cute. I love the concept with the sink, add a bit of contrasty light and it would be a stunning image!
     
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    Thanks ! nice to see there is people from ottawa around here!
     

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