D-I-E is for Diesel

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  1. Browncoat

    Browncoat No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    The more I read and learn about different styles, the more I have enjoyed urban decay photos and "grunge" style editing. I think this is my best shot to date:

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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Would have been nice if you crouched down a little more and framed out DIE so it was clear.
     
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    Pic looks good. I agree w/ bitter about framing the DIE a little more
     
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    Ron Evers Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Aside from the above comments I would capture less foreground (pavement) & take in more of the buildings.
     
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    pbelarge TPF Noob!

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    I am not sure what it is, but I get lost in this photo. There are lines going in all directions.
    I would also get lower to capture the DIE if that was my focus. I would also shoot in much closer, tighten the shot up some.
    We all have different desires in a shot, this one does not capture me.
     
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    gsgary Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Doesn't do much for me, shooting the benal is a lot harder than people thihk take a look at Stephen Shaw or William Eggleston for ideas
     
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    Browncoat No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Thanks for the comments, guys...much appreciated. This location is just a few miles from me, so I will take everything into consideration and take some additional shots.
     

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