Dad and daughter.

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by fi0, Mar 26, 2008.

  1. fi0

    fi0 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2008
    Messages:
    112
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    missing New Jersey in FORT MYERS :)
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I thought this was a pretty candid moment =]
    comment / critique pleaseee :c)

    [​IMG]
     
  2. MarcusM

    MarcusM TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Sep 12, 2007
    Messages:
    1,236
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    St. Paul, MN, USA
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I can see the concept, but I don't like how both the faces are hidden.

    Also, they are crowding the right edge and there is too much negative space on the left.

    I think this would have been tough to get their faces and include the lake they're looking at (and also the fence, which I like). Do you have any other from a different angle?
     
  3. fi0

    fi0 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2008
    Messages:
    112
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    missing New Jersey in FORT MYERS :)
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit

    unfortunately i don't. =(

    i really have no experience with photography so I'm just wingin it. I'm in the process of making a huge move(jersey to florida =) ) so it put my education for it on hold

    thank you for the critique though.
     

Share This Page