Dali

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by freemoney, Jun 10, 2010.

  1. freemoney

    freemoney TPF Noob!

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    These was taken with a Holga 120N. It is a pretty simple picture, but I think it came out well.

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    not bad..seems grainy though
     
  3. Steve Reddin

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    Hi,

    Probably because I'm very old school in photography, and I also like true B&W, not PS colour images, for me this is one of the best images I've seen for a long time, it's simple and pure; basically a great portrait.

    If I had to critique it I would say that the light behind and above her makes it look like she's having a, albeit small, idea. I'd also suggest the top is cropped a little just to bring her higher up the frame and away from the centre.

    Steve
     

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