dances with lizards

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  1. judehei

    judehei TPF Noob!

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    Hrm....... this photo combines two of my great passions.... Sobe fruit drinks, and chain mail!

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    and another picture from the same card, if anyone's interested:
    http://www.lemoncandy.com/portraits/bean0538.JPG

    comments welcome, good/bad/ugly as always.
     
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    I see red X only :(
     
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    Don't you just love the Sobe Grape!
     
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    anything I should do differently?
     
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    Karalee hOtLiPs!

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    Wow that was really cool. What was your setup? Its a bit dark in the foreground, but it seems to work for me.
     
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    Sobe Dragon!

    Great shots, those are worthy of an official advertisement.

    Anything differently?

    Hmmm, Only thing I can think of is the image is very very warm. It's either shadow or warm colors, perhaps an area of cooler colors to contrast the warm might help. Just an idea, it could turn out horrible...
     
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    lovely composition and colors, nothing really to critique
     
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    judehei TPF Noob!

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    Red bed sheets, white sheer fabric, pink stained glass lamp, bottle, some chain mail jewelry......

    and my pos nikon coolpix on macro mode. :D

    I was definately going for the warm look, though, so it doesn't bug me at all.
    thanks guys.
     
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    looks great to me. jmo
     
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    Outstanding! Must have taken a long tine to set up the shot? I generally do not care for commercial photography but i would hang this pic on the wall

    edit... On second thought, it's not a commercial shot....it's just a great piece of artistic photography. :D
     

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