Dandelion

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  1. cherrymoose

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    Half of me likes this, and half of me doesn't. Is it because the subject isn't totally in focus? Or the bright blue blurs around each 'figure'? I don't know. C&C?

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    I don't like it becuase the sky is completly blown out.
     
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    It just needed a square crop, more blur, and a frame. Nice image with just a little work...

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    Thanks, I really like your version. I was thinking along the lines of a tighter crop.... :) I was hoping someone would edit it for me.
     
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    Nice shot, and better with the crop
     
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    yup yup. Go for the crop.
     
  7. astrostu

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    I concur that the crop helps. I also think it would be better with more contrast between the dandelion and the background (making the background darker).
     
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    is that a radial blur you added?! works to isolate the subject more... cool
     
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    Yeah, maybe make the background a little darker. I like it
     
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    Crop, frame, a tad of saturation and a tad of sharpening.
     

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