Dare I post here- part 2, Senior shots C&C welcome

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  1. transformed

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    1st one is pretty good.
    2nd one looks too edited. her face looks kinda plastic.

    overall good job though!
     
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    Beautiful shots! I, also, like #1 the best.
    #2 could use a little more fill light and it would be better if she were a little further away from the backdrop to avoid the shadow and take the background out of focus.
     
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    Nice clean shot on the first. The second seems to need a bit more directional lighting.
     
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    Is there a person there in #2?? All I see is a bunch of gray!! :lol:

    A different color backgound for the gray sweatshirt would look nice.
     
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    Keith- yes! Back further from the backdrop- I think I need to do that on all my shoots.

    Lloyd- Yep- I hear ya gray. It does sort of have a prison feel. lol
     

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