Dark Unknown?

[er111a]

Thank you

 

[thebeatles]

I do not like the black frame/white vignette here. I think that if you eliminated those factors, the photo would be more engaging.

 

[adversus]

I agree, the white is really distracting.

I like the rest of the shot, although I think it'd look better being a straight view, it looks a bit off center.

 

[FattyMcJ]

Excellent idea, it's a bit skewed clockwise but barely noticeable.

My main issue with this is the lines in the middle.

What happened? It's incredibly distracting in a nice soft image with depth and a fantastic mood.

 

[er111a]

something in PP I guess I think I tried a old photo effect and then did a zoom blur and the lines stayed there :/ easy fix but annoying lol

 

[FattyMcJ]

something in PP I guess I think I tried a old photo effect and then did a zoom blur and the lines stayed there :/ easy fix but annoying lol

Yeah, ditch the lines, change the white to a sepia or brownish tone (or take it out all together) and I think it would make it better.

 

[FattyMcJ]

Just playing around with your photo, hope you don't mind. I kept a LITTLE bit of your white border and minimized the black border. Also made the hallway look infinite and attempted (quickly, nothing serious) to blur the horizontal lines.

 

[er111a]

thats pretty cool