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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by er111a, Mar 7, 2010.

  1. er111a

    er111a TPF Noob!

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    Thank you
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    I do not like the black frame/white vignette here. I think that if you eliminated those factors, the photo would be more engaging.
     
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    I agree, the white is really distracting.

    I like the rest of the shot, although I think it'd look better being a straight view, it looks a bit off center.
     
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    Excellent idea, it's a bit skewed clockwise but barely noticeable.

    My main issue with this is the lines in the middle.

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    What happened? It's incredibly distracting in a nice soft image with depth and a fantastic mood.
     
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    something in PP I guess I think I tried a old photo effect and then did a zoom blur and the lines stayed there :/ easy fix but annoying lol
     
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    Yeah, ditch the lines, change the white to a sepia or brownish tone (or take it out all together) and I think it would make it better.
     
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    Just playing around with your photo, hope you don't mind. I kept a LITTLE bit of your white border and minimized the black border. Also made the hallway look infinite and attempted (quickly, nothing serious) to blur the horizontal lines.

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    thats pretty cool :)
     

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