day at the beach in B&W

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Jonathan Schertzer, Jan 10, 2010.

  1. Jonathan Schertzer

    Jonathan Schertzer TPF Noob!

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    C&C welcome
     
  2. ocular

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    First one seems to be off kilter ( not level ) and I've seen this before, looks like your copying. I would suggest avoiding the dock altogether ;)
     
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    The surfer in #3 really adds something to the shot. Overall, they have great lines. Could use a bit more contrast.
     
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    Off the end of the pier is something ... in the first photo is looks like part of the water making the horizon feel tilted...but you can see in the others it is land?

    I love the photo with the surfer btw. Brrr.
     
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    NIce pics good eye for what could be a potentially good photo...only prob I see is the dullness (shades of grey are taking over) the 3rd photo is gretting there.
     

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