day at the beach

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  1. defectir3

    defectir3 TPF Noob!

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    whats up guys this is my first time posting a picture here an im just tryint o get some feedback but i do want people to be brutal... because.. well thats the only way to learn.. i took this picture a while back and i haven't touched it much with photo shop and im thinking i should crop it a bit more to get the man on the far right out of the picture entirely... let me know what you think.. and of course anything else you think i should work on
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    darin3200 TPF Noob!

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    I don't think that you need to include all of the guy on the right, since he is in the background and not the focus of the picture. I would like to see a little more contrast, you have a lot going on with the shadows there that could be brought out more.

    And welcome to TPF :)
     
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    thanks man... the only thing holding me back from cutting the man totally out is that he kinda gives like an atmosphere thing.. but then again theres also enough in the background..
     

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