Day three, old warehouse

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  1. sanchezka

    sanchezka TPF Noob!

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    It's seems that I've only gotten time to take photo's at night with long exposures. I haven't really wanted this to be "my style" but at least the weekend is coming up and I can try this baby out in the day time.

    Photo's been cropped. Otherwise it's as shot.

    Feel free to comment, critique, etc. I'm all about getting better.

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  2. IgsEMT

    IgsEMT No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I love the mood of the image.
    Its like all peaceful during day but comes night all vampires come out :D
    Great capture.
     
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    Very well composed crop. The angles and lines flow into each other. I like the splash of sunlight, on the peak of the building. This is a very strong image. My only critique would be that I would like to see the sky just a hair darker and more stars. But that's a very minor nitpick.



    ........ I took the liberty again... I sure hope it's ok with you. I added a few more stars.... but I'm sure they were there, the camera just didn't see them. So I don't feel adding them is making it fake, but merely adding to what would otherwise be visible.


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    I think this edit does your original justice IMHO
     
  4. sanchezka

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    It's funny because I thought people would say something like that. However this was shot a couple of hours after sunset. It was very dark and the "sunlight" you see is from a street light. They all seem to be very orange here in japan. The scene lighting was from a lit window on an adjacent building which was white.
     
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    Streetlight, sunlight, no matter it looks good that way.
     

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