dead on? dead wrong?

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  1. mcbphoto

    mcbphoto TPF Noob!

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    i just got my D70 last night :lol: and i took this picture.
    i was wondering what you guys think of the composition mostly.
    is it too boring?
    weird colors?
    let it all out folks, any help is good help.

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    EDIT: sorry about the pic not showing up.
     
  2. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    The colors seem to work well together, the composition is more than just ordinary. Nice use of the roof as a diagonal line.

    I find it lacking a major point of interest though.
     
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    that's why im posting here.
    thanks a lot for your input ill go back and try to find that POI.
     
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    I love the color, crispness, and the placement of the roof in the bottom right corner.

    But that it's lacking a "point of interest" is a good way to put it. Not bad, but it needs something to set it apart and make it memorable.
     
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    works for me! :thumbsup:
     
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    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    i like it :0 composition is ok, and i like the washed colors of the building :)
     

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