Death on the Rails

bulldurham · May 13, 2017

I like the image, Dean, but when your logo overpowers the scene, I get turned off.

Dean_Gretsch · May 13, 2017

Ahhh....I was afraid of that. Guess I should have listened to that little voice. Thank you for your honesty!

annamaria · May 13, 2017

I do like the image minus the watermark.

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bulldurham · May 13, 2017

Smaller, less opaque and away from the primary focal point.

BananaRepublic · May 13, 2017

Dean_Gretsch said:
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Before you export the file just move the watermark to a different location. If you use Lightroom its way and on the same export screen.

Dean_Gretsch · May 13, 2017

annamaria said:
I do like the image minus the watermark.

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bulldurham said:
Smaller, less opaque and away from the primary focal point.

BananaRepublic said:
Dean_Gretsch said:

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Before you export the file just move the watermark to a different location. If you use Lightroom its way and on the same export screen.

Thank all of you for the welcomed critique. I do appreciate all advice from everyone. Once I get home later tonight, I will see about improving it. Thanks again!

Dean_Gretsch · May 13, 2017

Ok, the crop is close to the original. Post editing is a little different. I hope this is what you guys were talking about.

BrentC · May 13, 2017

Very nice! I like it much better.

katsrevenge · May 13, 2017

Very nice, without the really big watermark.

Dean_Gretsch · May 13, 2017

BrentC said:
Very nice! I like it much better.

katsrevenge said:
Very nice, without the really big watermark.

Thank you both very much!

bulldurham · May 14, 2017

Yeah, that's the ticket.

The_Traveler · May 14, 2017

I like the way it looks but the image is a bit incoherent.
Why is the skull sitting on the rail?
The two parts of the image don't mesh.

Dean_Gretsch · May 14, 2017

bulldurham said:
Yeah, that's the ticket.

Thank you BD for the insight and suggestions.

The_Traveler said:
I like the way it looks but the image is a bit incoherent.
Why is the skull sitting on the rail?
The two parts of the image don't mesh.

Well, I am glad you liked the imagery even if it doesn't make sense. Perhaps if I had titled it " This route leads to death..."?
I just liked the way it looked. Thanks for your thoughts and input.