Denise

[alessio]

Hi all! I'm Alessio, from Venice, Italy. This is my first post here, so here are a few words about me. First of all I hope my hosting service supports linking ! Then..well, I'm 29 years old, I am not a pro, or at least not yet.. I take shoots since 4 years...and my favourite genres are fashion, music and landscapes. What else.. I hope my english will be not as terrific as I fear..!
Cheers!

 

[wildmaven]

What else.. I hope my english will be not as terrific as I fear..!

I think you meant "I hope my english will not be as terrible as I fear." The way you said it means you are hoping you are bad.

Very pretty model. Nice backlighting. I'd get rid of that pink sticker on the wall, though.

I think your crop is a bit tight, as her head is bumping against the top of the picture.

 

[TCimages]

Welcome to the forum. I agree on the crop. Otherwise I really like it. Not to mention the beautiful model.

 

[alessio]

thanks you both! now I have the proof (i I ever needed one.. ) that my English is terrific! I agree that the crop is a bit tight. What about the post-work? I'm messing around with photoshop for the first time..

 

[kundalini]

Welcome.

Nice photo. I like the back lighting as well.

 

[ClarkKent]

Nice capture!

 

[Flash Harry]

Think I'll make Venice my next holiday if the girls are as pretty as this, and the crops fine to me if you want it to be a fashion "look" H

PS: Wlidmaven, thats a container she's climbing on, the sticker will be a hazard warning.

 

[GHP]

I think the PP is nice as is the pose and of course, the model! I agree with what has already been said regarding the top of her head.

 

[Alpha]

Beautiful woman.

The eyes aren't engaging enough. They look a bit lifeless. The skin-smoothing on the face doesn't help...it makes her look like a doll. Also, a flash of some sort would have helped to illuminate the hair.