Derelict Industry

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    AAARGH why do I not have a knack for picking catchy titles!?

    ANY comments? Please? If it sucks just say so.
     
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    It doesn't look derelict to me. I like the shot and the way you included foreground and sky in it. But it does not invoke a 'derelict' feeling in me. Could just be me.:)
     
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    Thanks. Fair enough on the derelict quality, I guess you could call that a matter of opinion but I can assure you that it is an out of use, rotten building with smashed windows! :D
     
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    I guess what I mean is that I was expecting a more depressing image from the title and I find that this is far from depressing.
     
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    It is a very clean, nice and simple image. I like it.
     
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    Fair enough, I didn't really intend the title to hint at a depressing image but that could be my mistake.

    It's nice to hear that. I do try to keep it simple and uncluttered.
     
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    this is a fine shot, well lit with great colour...however for me it doesn't reflect the title.
     
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    I'm gonna have to agree with people that the title doesn't really seem particularly fitting. It's too colorful, bright, alive to be considered 'derelict' to me. That doesn't necessarily make it a bad shot, but I'm not really getting much of a purpose from the shot.
     
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    Guess I picked the wrong title then. I'm not sure what you mean by not getting much of a purpose from the shot?
     

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