Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by DPW2007, Mar 12, 2008.
Two of the best from when I went out and about with ferny;
1. Metal Staircase
2. Rusty Staircase
1 has potential for a very graphic image because of these lines and the repeating patterns. If so, I think it might come out stronger if the perspective is more straight. As for 2, it has a strong feel of the "abandoned" milieu, the colors are helpful here.
Looks a bit spooky, great background for a self-portrait.
the bottom 3rd of #1 is so dark...thats the part I dont care for. I dont know where the stairs GO...know what I mean?
#2 is better. Still kinda dark, but maybe without the darkness it wouldnt be as spooky, like the pp said.
Thank you very much for your comments!!
I'm going to see if I can shoot these ones better - they are the best of a bad bunch but still can't help thinking they are more of a work in progress!!
Plus I have the weekend free so I can have some fun with these buildings again!!!
Thanks again, much appreciated,
That second shot is very cool!! Love the colours and the gritty feel to it.
love the first one!
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