Derelict Staircases

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  1. DPW2007

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    Two of the best from when I went out and about with ferny;

    1. Metal Staircase
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    2. Rusty Staircase

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    1 has potential for a very graphic image because of these lines and the repeating patterns. If so, I think it might come out stronger if the perspective is more straight. As for 2, it has a strong feel of the "abandoned" milieu, the colors are helpful here.

    Looks a bit spooky, great background for a self-portrait. ;)
     
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    the bottom 3rd of #1 is so dark...thats the part I dont care for. I dont know where the stairs GO...know what I mean?

    #2 is better. Still kinda dark, but maybe without the darkness it wouldnt be as spooky, like the pp said.
     
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    Thank you very much for your comments!!

    I'm going to see if I can shoot these ones better - they are the best of a bad bunch but still can't help thinking they are more of a work in progress!!

    Plus I have the weekend free so I can have some fun with these buildings again!!!

    Thanks again, much appreciated,

    David
     
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    That second shot is very cool!! Love the colours and the gritty feel to it.
     
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    love the first one!
     

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