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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Pinus strobus, Apr 16, 2008.

  1. Pinus strobus

    Pinus strobus TPF Noob!

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    I found an deserted building. This is my favorite out all that I took.
    Let me know what you think.

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  2. kundalini

    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    IMO, you should back off and get more of the main entrance or get tighter and focus on certain details in the shot. Looks like it could be a very interesting building, but the crop doesn't work for me.

    It is a shame to see such a majestic building like this in such disrepair.
     
  3. nealjpage

    nealjpage multi format master in a film geek package

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    Neat building. Where is that?
     
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    parish nation TPF Noob!

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    I like it, but I agree with kundalini. cool shot tho
     
  5. Pinus strobus

    Pinus strobus TPF Noob!

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    I am not sure what this building was, it is in Detroit near the old Tigers stadium.

    I agree about the crop, it doesnt work too well. It was hard to get a shot of the main enterance because of the fence around the building. I think I like this shot better. What do you think?

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    it is too close to make a comment! get a better angle dude!
     

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