Determination: Self-Portrait C&C Please!

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by genital_apparatus, Mar 8, 2009.

  1. genital_apparatus

    genital_apparatus TPF Noob!

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    Hey all, I was bored today so I thought I'd try working on a simple self-portrait. Theme was stated in the title, I was going for a gritty, dirty, at-home-athlete feel. Not sure if I got it quite right. I'm thinking my background may have been a little cluttered. Post comments at will.

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  2. 250Gimp

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    Nice shot, but your right...the background is too cluttered.

    Move the other bikes and the tool box and you are set.
     
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    The chandelier is also distracting. I have the same one in my kitchen oddly enough.
     

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