Do these work?

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  1. Iamme

    Iamme TPF Noob!

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    Do these look ok or weird or right or not? It's hard to critique your own work (with your own child), are they too soft or does it work?

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  2. macropleasure

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    i like the second one..but on the first one the child does not look very happy..

    hmm..i do not know enough about photography..so i cannot tell if they are too soft...but i like them..
     
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    Yes, both images seem too soft to me. Both images also look like they need more contrast. I would also strongly encourage you to crop out a huge portion of the sky. It is really bright and draws my eye away from the subject.

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    haha I dont thikn he's s upposed to look happy in the first one :) So cute. They are nice but I am a contrast freak and so I say a tad more and you'll be good to go. :thumbup:
     

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