Do you like this flower?

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  1. pierrottweiler

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    I like your concept...just think the focus is off.
     
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    I think it's a good attempt, but the composition is lacking, imho. Everything is too squared up and centered for my tastes.
     
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    needs to improve but its kinda good..keep on practicing ..
     
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    ok, thanks for all your comments; I will keep on practicing!! and will also buy a new camera
     
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    The second one is good, but seems to be on the cool side. Maybe warm it up and adjust contrast/hue/saturation to pop the color.
     
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    It's good! I like the 2nd one more.
     
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    Looks good, and with a flower like this, the centredness of the composition works perfectly well! Only focus/sharpness are still lacking a bit, but in the course of time, you'll master also that!
     
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    Hello and thank you for your comments!
    Here is the second photo with changes in saturation/gamma
    Do you prefer this version?
     
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    Yes i prefer this version. However i believe that you could take a different angle and greatly increase the value of the composition. Im just not a fan of square straight on photos.
     
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    I think you need a narrower depth of field, particularly the first one. The background is too distracting.
     

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