Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by pierrottweiler, Nov 11, 2008.
more pictures in my photoblog
I like your concept...just think the focus is off.
I think it's a good attempt, but the composition is lacking, imho. Everything is too squared up and centered for my tastes.
needs to improve but its kinda good..keep on practicing ..
ok, thanks for all your comments; I will keep on practicing!! and will also buy a new camera
The second one is good, but seems to be on the cool side. Maybe warm it up and adjust contrast/hue/saturation to pop the color.
It's good! I like the 2nd one more.
Looks good, and with a flower like this, the centredness of the composition works perfectly well! Only focus/sharpness are still lacking a bit, but in the course of time, you'll master also that!
Hello and thank you for your comments!
Here is the second photo with changes in saturation/gamma
Do you prefer this version?
Yes i prefer this version. However i believe that you could take a different angle and greatly increase the value of the composition. Im just not a fan of square straight on photos.
I think you need a narrower depth of field, particularly the first one. The background is too distracting.
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