Does this work?

[elsaspet]

I'm trying to use actions on wedding stuff. This action is called "Midnight Sepia". Does it work in this photo?

 

[Hertz van Rental]

It's really nice - my only criticism is that you have focussed on the veil and not the face. It's easy to do - especially if you use auto focus.
Getting her eyes sharp whilst softening the veil by pulling focus would have made it much better. With the veil sharp you look at it not her.
It does flatter her though.
But I'm just being picky.

 

[eydryan]

sweet! i like the eyes. they're big and open and attract attention like a magnet. i would have liked to see more of her nose, but i too am too damned picky

well it's an open and shut case, this is one for the print shop

 

[elsaspet]

I'm having way too much fun with these actions. How is this one.

 

[Hertz van Rental]

The first one has far more warmth and life. The b&w just looks washed out.

 

[eydryan]

nah, not so nice, especially the border.