Don't go in there ...

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  1. AlbertoDeRoma

    AlbertoDeRoma TPF Noob!

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    Trying my hand at Silver Efex (based on recommendations from some people here). I think it worked quite well to help me convey the decay and sense of dread surrounding this abandoned house.

    Criticism and feedback is always welcome.

    Alberto

    Leica Digilux 2, f/2.8, 1/125

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    usayit No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I like the texture.
    The right and left of the photo is a little unbalanced.
    The photo is a bit tilted clockwise
    I do like the effect .. I have been meaning to try out Silver Efex
    I don't think the vignette adds to the photos feel.
     
  3. AlbertoDeRoma

    AlbertoDeRoma TPF Noob!

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    Thank you for the candid feedback. I can see what you are saying about the L/R balance.

    For the tilting I lined up with one line instead of "splitting the difference" - and you "caught" me.

    Very useful. Thanks again.

    Alberto
     

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