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  1. thebeginning

    thebeginning TPF Noob!

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    just something between mine and my neighbor's house. Alot of it was near the same color, so it's kind of hard to depict exactly what is going on when you first see it...at least in my opinion. so its more like a 'hidden' doorway i suppose. I changed some contrasts to make it a little more obvious.

    let me know what you think

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    the contrast is a bit too high i think..but the composition is very nice
     
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    yes i can see an archway or something,did you capture it in b/w, or did you convert it that way? because there is'nt much going on,if thats the right word to use, it might have been more interesting in colour, and probably shown more detail, just my opinion!
     
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    no it was color. here is the original:

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    a very different image from the edited one once i look back at it. it is still life though, so i guess you are right, there isnt much 'going on'. thanks for the comments though guys...
     
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    now that is a much better image IMO,it shows much more detail, it does'nt have that intermingled look of the b/w version, :thumbup:
     

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