Drowning *NWS*

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  1. MyaLover

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    Just a few done out of boredom this evening, C&C as always

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    A couple more edits:

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    2 and 1a both have skin tones that say youre dead. that was my initial thought looking at 2 (face and hand), but when i got to 1a, i really felt that way. and for me, its hard to tell that youre under water but i like the concept.
     
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    I like the PP on the second one of the first set.
     
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    doesnt do much for me.. i didnt even know she was underwater..
     
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    Anyone have any ideas for a better title??
     
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    I like number 5 best. The nipple bar kills the others for me (my age is showing) 5 is well composed, the tones are good, and is an overall good shot.
    I hate to say it, but they all, especially the ones with her eyes closed, look like crime scene photos.
    Judge Sharpe
     
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    to me your b&w looks too gray.
     
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    I'd like to see a bit more directional light on her face...
     

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