Eastern port

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  1. nomade

    nomade TPF Noob!

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    IMO, this has several obvious problems
    A tilted horizon that divides the picture in half, a featureless sky above and a intrusive signature that draws the viewer's eye.
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    Thank you for the critique Traveler, I may have rushed with this one.
     
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    The horizon is the first thing I noticed. I always do that in my pictures too and have to fix them later.

    The fort or whatever it is that is lit up makes the picture feel heavy on the left side to me.
     

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