Edinburgh Castle

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  1. hdukphotographs

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    This is a photo i took of Edinburgh Castle i would love everyones opinion of it maybe tips to make it better.


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    Well. i'm not sure what you did to this, or how you did it, but for me, i can't get into the look here... Can ya post the original ? Love to see how it looks?
     
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    I agree with NEM. It looks way over-manipulated to me. The sky doesn't look real, and, well, I just don't know what's going on with the hill.

    The basic composition looks pretty good. Like NEM, I'd like to see the original photo.
     
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    your composition could be a little better as well. Try to manuever to get the fountain in your left third of the frame and the castle up in the top right third. Like you have it is alright, each is just kind of approaching each others territory lol. I could see this being more of a vertical crop the way you have empty space on each end.
     
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    Thanks all for your advice.here is the original

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    It is too confusing to my eyes. If you wanted to get the castle, leave the fountain out. Sometimes simpler is better.
     

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