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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Michaelintraining, Nov 23, 2008.

  1. Michaelintraining

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    Did i go a bit over the top on this?
    Thanks, Michael.

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    No, not over the top. I would probably tone down the green a little and maybe crop out a little of the sky so the horizon isn't so centered. Overall, not a bad shot.
     
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    How's this?
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    Second one really looks great. Good job. The colors are perfect.
     
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    I like the second shot a lot better. Has a better "feel" overall and without so much sky, your eyes follow the shapes and contours of the mountains. It's a nice shot.
     
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    I like the crop of #2, and the colors of #1
     
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    ^ I agree with this.

    Also, the picture seems a bit soft.

    Great job!
     
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    ^^ditto, number one looks way better, but even that half inch of the sky cut out doesnt make a huge difference
     
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    The colors could be in between. To my eyes, the first shot is a little too "lime-y" in color in the forground and looks a little unnatural. The background is nice.
     
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    Thanks guys ill bear that in mind :D
     

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