Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Cormut, Sep 24, 2004.
liked the blur and contrast. Nikon N80 with 50mm Nikkor 1.8f. Ilford 400 film and a red filter.
since you put this in critique..ill give it a go.
1) im not fond of the vignetting on the sides...was this intentional or an unfortunate byproduct?
2) i love lots of grain in black and white prints, good work
3) the angle of the shot doesnt sit well with me...im not sure why..it has a video feel to it, like some one capturing spooky images with a recorder.
just my .02
hi, and thanks for your comments. The vignetting wasn't intentional, it stands out a lot more on the right side. And I agree with you about the symmetry. This was an end-of the roll shot, but next time I will experiment with different angles.
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