Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by bsdubois00, Aug 17, 2010.
I took these for my brother last year and just found them.
Bump - anyone?
First is overexposed.
Composition on each is good though. I think the first should be cropped tighter on the top but that could just be the overexposure playing with me.
The dude looks like he's trying to hard with the smiles haha.
Your brother looks like that dude from Earth: 3rd rock from the sun!! But in a not so goofy way!
1. is over exposed, but it doesn't look too bad I can see the challenges you were working with there.
2. I'd crop just the couple.
3. I love this, but yeah, I feel he's pushing the smile.
Thanks for the C&C so far - sometimes my brothers smile is alil forced - all serious and no play LOL (I hope his wife doesn't read this LOL)
#1 - it was def tricky on the composition - maybe alil PP can fix that
#2 - I was going for something different with the crop - but I can most def cut it down to more of them two
i kind of like #3 if the smiles were a touch more natural. Overall pretty decent
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