Enjoying the Park

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  1. SpaceNut

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    I tagged along with a close friend, Brandon, to the Perry Farm (a park) so he could shoot a family portrait and I could learn a little on portrait photography. After the shoot, I took several pictures of the family. This one is of my neice, Heather. C/C. OTE!


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  2. KevinR

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    Not seeing the image
     
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    Sorry, I missed a step and will have do it over. Thanks!
     
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    The top of her forhead is a bit bright but besides that I like it looks good
     
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    since you said ote though this might be easier.
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    Yep, it's a little on the bright side. Also, not sure if I'm liking all the space on the left. Maybe cropping just a little bit of that off might look better? I'm not sure.
     
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    Well, I have to say is that I do like the cropped version better. Don't know what it is, but just seems like a better photograph.
     
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    ^ Mysteryscribe has an eye for cropping photos.
     

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