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  1. danalec99

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    I like this picture for the simple reason it creatively shows simple life. I am not too sure about the contrast, I wouldn't mind the shot to be a touch brighter, but that might make the bright spot (sunlight from a window) a bit too bright.
     
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    Excellent!!! I am fully intrigued by the whole shot. On one hand it is contemplative with nice shadows and highlights. On the other hand it could be a sci fi scene. The part where the characters get absorbed out of their shoes into the 9th Dimension. I also have to add that the hot spot for me is a key element.

    The only suggestion I would have, is maybe put a level on the camera. At second glance it seems close, but something is off.
     
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    Craig, I noted the same thing while looking at this shot. The First corner on your left side seems to lean into the frame right? I can't seem to find anything else that was off, so I was wondering if the photo was taken on a slight incline.
     
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    Thanks for the comments/suggestions Maven, Craig.
    You are right about the level. This was a quick, handheld shot. Will redo it with a tripod.
     
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    I really like this one... yes again. Its so simple but it tells a story. Excellent stuff.
     
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    Thanks KL :)
     
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    Extra credit for being a hand held shot. I thought for sure that it was on a tripod.
     
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