eternal sunline

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  1. manda

    manda instigator of pottymouthedness

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    if all the goodbyes
    disappear,
    where do the kisses flow?
    i'd write you a letter wrapped
    in my tears
    if only there were enough for you to know

    id build you a shadow
    of me
    to hide behind in guilt
    a song for you to lie with
    a love good enough to die with

    i would have crossed a thousand suns for you
    and pieced together your heart and thoughts
    with your hand at my side
    and not in my way

    i would have died
    within the life i knew
    if only to spend one night with you.
     
  2. Luminosity

    Luminosity No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I really like your writing style Manda ..... this piece and the first piece you posted in this forum both express the emotions behind the words very well. I can relate to the thoughts/emotions expressed ...
    Your writing comes from a raw , honest place so thank you for sharing it :hug:
     
  3. manda

    manda instigator of pottymouthedness

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    Thanks
    Ive always been told things like that.
    This other forum Ive posted in where people dont know me well..
    this guy said "you scare me" lol
     
  4. markc

    markc TPF Noob!

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    Wow... Some amazing imagery you've spun, manda.
     
  5. terri

    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I really like this one, too, Manda. You're very good. :) I'm so glad you're sharing this stuff with us.
     
  6. manda

    manda instigator of pottymouthedness

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