Eve (not work safe)

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  1. DramaDork626

    DramaDork626 TPF Noob!

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    Here I was going for a peaceful effect kind of giving it and Adam and Eve-like theme.
    Does it come across?
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    No IMO, her eye makeup is to dark and the bricks column seem like the wrong setting for Adam and Eve, and it’s a bit erotic, more of a 60’s free love felling IMO,

    But do I like the shoot other that the dark make up around the eyes
     
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    I have to say I'm with jeff. I like the picture, but I don't get the whole adam and eve thing. I think the dark makeup ruins the effect.
     
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    Umm... I think its a good idea and a good start...
    A tree instead of a brick wall would have been cooler - and I think you need a model with DARK long hair and the makeup should either be lighter or much darker.

    I see lonnggg black hair with dark sharp eye makeup... and something different with the leaves...against a tree with really cool bark.

    Just my thoughts - cool idea tho..
    b

    Edit - and no necklace - and the inclusion of an apple or something would be kinda neat... maybe an apple orchard with the other trees in the background - kinda blurred..

    lol - sorry... i get into the dark stuff...hehe
     

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