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  1. Tuna

    Tuna Supermodel

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    All comments/critique greatly appreciated.

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  2. Tuna

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    Or cropped tighter?

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  3. Chase

    Chase I am now benign! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I like the tigher crop, it helps to really focus the attention on the subject.

    Exposure looks good, subject is interesting and you caught some great emotion. Really a great shot in my opinion!
     
  4. canonrebel

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    Nice exposure and depiction of character. A main subject is clearly depicted, but perhaps it is too centered in the frame. I think more picture added to the right border would have improved the composition.
     
  5. Corry

    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    I like the tighter crop as well, but agree with CR about the centering. Nice shots! You've posted some good ones lately!

    BTW, Long time no see Cannonrebel!
     
  6. Chase

    Chase I am now benign! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Although normally I would agree with the centering of the image, in this case, the use of the foreground to frame the subject makes the centering work for me.
     
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    I agree with Chase on this one. The second crop give the image more power and the line of people on the right lead your eye right to the subject. I think the framing here is top notch!
     

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