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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by spiffybeth, Sep 11, 2008.

  1. spiffybeth

    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    so i took a photo i liked and i applied filters to it and edited to my liking, but i have no idea if these work.

    general feedback on your thoughts when you view these are appreciated. c/c is also welcome!

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  2. jas00n_86

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    I like the fourth pic the most. Now you should go back in and brush some color in.
     
  3. johngpt

    johngpt No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    #1 #5 seem to have a very bright splotch at the subject's left side neck, which is pretty distracting.

    #2 is rather smudgy and indistinct.

    #s 3 and 4 have excellent potential as commercial illustrative techniques. I've seen techniques such as this in magazines teaching Adobe Illustrator techniques and magazines showing off various illustrator's work.

    I like jas00n_86's idea about painting back in some color, possibly using #3?
     

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