Experiments in composition/C&C pls

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  1. Bryan

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    and an abstract for an assigment from an online course suggested on this forum

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    #1 is excellent, but the rest don't do much for me. Really good work on #1 though!
     
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    I agree #1 is definitely the strongest shot, with the best use of the lines and angles and light :)
     
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    2 would be better but you cropped off part of the edge...just seems odd to me
     
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    This is abstract? I knew what I was looking immediately, but perhaps my understanding of the term is too literal.

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    Probably not your understanding of the term, but mine...guess I need to look at some more abstracts before turning that in
     
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    The cropping tool can make an abstract out of almost any interesting shot. Your last shot almost works, but never seems to come into focus.

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    I have an old friend in Encinitas who I have lost contact with. He is a photog and surfer...Greg Loomer...Encinitas is a small town, or was 20 yrs. ago, do ya know him?
     
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    Not by name but I would probably recognize his photo.

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    oh well...longshot...don't have a pic....probably early 50's now
     

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