Fading path C&C

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  1. Brutus

    Brutus TPF Noob!

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    I was on a walk today and figured I'd take some pictures as well, and this is one that I'm the most happy with. I'd like some C&C on it, though, if possible.

    Taken with a Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ28, f/3.6 @ 1/60 of a second.

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  2. Early

    Early TPF Noob!

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    I hate to say this, but it's pretty uninteresting. The only potential I see is where the upper roadway is framed by the trees. Use that for a shot, and you might have something.
     
  3. D-B-J

    D-B-J Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    the foreground is just.. messyy..i agree that it is uninteresting..
     
  4. Photog

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    Two problems I can see:
    1) The foreground is too run-of-the-mill and untidy, and doesn't capture the eye in any great way
    2) The dip in the road combined with the composition you've chosen means that the road is broken up and incapable of leading the eye through the image.
     
  5. Timothy

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    just 1 problem i see:
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