Fall photoshoot

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by lilysmom, Oct 18, 2008.

  1. lilysmom

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    Here are some pictures I took last Monday. Idiot me forgot to check the ISO and I had it set to 800 from the last time I used it, so the pictures got noisier than they should of. That's the only thing I don't like about my camera. They were all shot with my 50mm 1.7 lens. Anyway, let me know what you think and how I can improve!

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  2. JenR

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    Since you asked for CC, I think your white balance is off-- these all look very yellow/orange to me. I also think they are a tad underexposed.

    She is a real cutie! I bet this was fun to do :wink: I think #4 is my favorite.
     
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    Agree with Jen, and in addition add that I would suggest trying to offset the subject from the centre of the image a little more.
     
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    cute kid
     
  5. lilysmom

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    Thanks guys. You really think the color is off, though? What's the proper way to set white balance? I had it set to cloudy and this is how they got. I see them as having a warm feeling which I like, but I guess I'm in the minority. :lol:
     
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    Yeah I think the white balance is a little off. Usually I shoot in Auto WB and then adjust it after in Adobe Camera Raw. I really like #5, I think it would look even better if it was horizontal and we saw more of the scene.
     
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    I shot these in RAW + jpg, but my card got corrupted and I couldn't recover the RAW files. I like to play with the WB when I shoot in RAW.
     

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