Family of Four

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  1. 3of11

    3of11 TPF Noob!

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    I thought this photo shoot went pretty well. I like how the pictures turned out, which means I don't know where to improve. I'm not saying that I think these are incredible, I just need more eyes to see what I can't see. Let me know what you think. I always learn so much from feedback. Thanks in advance.

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    those are beautiful!! I love the colors so rich and soft! That little girl is adorable! Great job!
     
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    The only criticism I have is that perhaps the skin tone is a slight bit red in the first one. It *may* be the monitor I'm on at the moment, though.
     
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    these are great. #1 is my fav. I wish i could see the babies face in 2 and in 4 it might have been nicer to have the girl sitting on dad's lab... no biggie, just a thought.

    overall, i think they are great. i'd love to see more in the series.
     
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    love the family picture in the gazibo..
     
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    before i start, i wanted to let you know im new to photography, but wahtever.

    i wish the green colour in #3 was brighter. the picture itself was real nice.

    where was this taken?
     
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    tenlientl - these pictures were taken in a botanical garden. Thank you everyone for your comments.
     
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    Hi 3of11...

    "I thought this photo shoot went pretty well. I like how the pictures turned out, which means I don't know where to improve. I'm not saying that I think these are incredible, I just need more eyes to see what I can't see. Let me know what you think. I always learn so much from feedback. Thanks in advance."

    Hmmm - well I don't know about the colours being rich (twocolor) they looked a bit flat to me..
    I d/l #1 and the histogram is flat - lack of contrast - curves
    I also thought they could be improved with some 'pop'... - L*a*b
    I didn't d/l the others to check but they all look flat...
    Jedo
     

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    Jedo, thanks for your feedback, I appreciate the time you took in doing the edit and giving me your critique.

    Other viewers, can I get some feedback on whether my edit looks better or Jedo's edit looks better? On my monitor Jedo's edit doesn't look very appealing, so I need to know if it is my monitor or just a different preference in editing.
     
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    Just to add - the edit I posted has an embedded profile, sRGB IEC61966-2.1
    If you are viewing this pic on your web browser, then unless you have FF4 or Safari, no other browsers support ICC profiles, and you will just see web/windows colour which is quite lame.
    Try copying it to PS - using the pic embedded profile.
    Jedo
     
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    The pictures are wonderful. My favorite is #1.
     

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