Family Session

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  1. 3of11

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    I would love c&c on this session. Especially #4. I like the idea but I'm not crazy about the picture. Any ideas on how to make it better? What are your thoughts on the rest of the pics?

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    overall, I like the set, quite nice. I do agree with you that #4 seems to be lacking a bit. Personally, what I don't like about it (though it's not bad) is the dappled light across the arms etc. In addition, at least on this monitor (uncalibrated) it almost looks like you did a partial desaturation, which I'm not a huge fan of here. They seem to be rather white. Though, again, that is from a crappy laptop screen.
     
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    It could be my monitor at work, but they seem as if the white balance is off just a bit. Their skin tones sim a bit cool, grayish, or like I said, it could just be my monitor. I do like number 4 though the best. Nice captures
     
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    I really think you did well to capture a loving family. WB appears to be an issue along with a very strong green/yellow on the little girl in 2&3. I wish you had chosen a different angle to reduce or eliminate the blown sky in 4. The boarders don't do anything for me.

    #1 is my fav, it's very genuine and sweet and I like the backlighting.
     
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    Thank you for your comments. What is the best thing to do to fix WB in photos after you've taken them?
     

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