Family Shoot - mine were chosen!

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  1. Mandra

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    We did a family shoot and some of my shots were chosen as proofs! It's very exciting to me as I do consider myself an amateur assistant... My fingers are crossed that the clients like them too. ;)

    As I don't normally shoot people, C&C are greatly appreciated. Thanks for looking!

    Kids feeding the ducks
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    Baby Emma
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    Grandpa
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    these are just my tastes but,

    1 is over saturated and you didn't leave any space to the left so that I can tell what the kids are doing. that bothers me.

    2 is too warm and the baby's head is overexposed. also, there are some little spots here and there that I would heal out (one on the baby's cheek, one on his sleeve etc)

    3 is pretty good, but I think it would benefit from more space above, below, and possibly to the left. I don't know I'd have to see it.


    cool pictures though, congrats on having your pictures picked!
     
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    Unfortunately, they were throwing bread at birds in a lake. I almost fell in just trying to get their faces. :lol: Thanks for the c&c.
     
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    hahaha the sacrifices we make for "the" shot!
     
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    Some sacrifices are too much, though! My husband (who gets paid to do this) sees me wobbling on the edge of the lake shouts, "Don't get the camera wet". :lmao:
     
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    At least he has his priorities in check!
     
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    i like #2
     
  8. Mandra

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    Thanks - it's my favorite too. It was taken without anyone knowing...
     
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    I'm in love with #2! Beautiful!
     
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    Thanks! Now I just need more of the same quality per shoot...
     

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