Farm with Round Bales

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  1. Ronman

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    I would appreciate any critique you might have of this Photo. I like it but it leaves me a little wanting. I'm just not sure what. Ron



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  2. DaveM

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    I like it but I suppose you could do something like this

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    The original picture is better. The edit is over-saturated.
     
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    Yip and that is why I said I like the original. Other then completely changing the look not much else I would do.
     
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    What are the subject of the picture?
    How does the composition demonstrate what you think?
    Why did you take it from this angle?
     
  6. Paolo Duzioni

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    Nice pic... without a soul.

    And too little room on the left.
     
  7. Ronman

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    Traveler, I cannot answer your questions. I took the picture because the light was so good.....and that's all I got.

    You're right, Paolo. Nothing to say.

    Thank you
     
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    IMO, the image would have been better if the post processing had been more selective. Too much realistate with the same amount of pp. I think the foreground and hay bales should have been less saturated than the barn which I consider to be the main subject.

    The hay bales are excellent anchors that point to the barn. It's an excellent composition
     

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