Fashion Show Model. First Time CC

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  1. zendianah

    zendianah TPF Noob!

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    Original : With little editing...

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    To much editing.. Just for fun.
     
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    I really don't like the edit at all and you have tons of noise or something going on in the image.
     
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    thank you for commenting.
     
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    I think the edit is pretty neat but I don't like all that distracting noise on the right side of the picture in the shadow area.
     
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    I agree. I don't either. I'm trying to figure out how to get rid of it. Thanks for commenting.
     
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    I think the original is good and strong as is. The second one is fun, but I agree with the above comments - if you could get rid of some of the noise it would look better.

    I like the expression, pose, and colors you caught a lot. It also neat to see the reactions in the crowd as well. The blown out highlights are a little distracting, but I think it works with this image - does that make any sense?
     
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    Thank you!! That does make sense to me. The club was VERY dark so I was hand holding the camera at 1/40 at 2.8 ISO 1600. used my flash as well. This is my first VERY dark setting.

    Thank you all for commenting I appreciate all sorts of critique.
     

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