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  1. MyaLover

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    beautiful model. I think the lighting is good, but I wish it were a little brighter. I think it may work even better portrait style.
     
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    Steph No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Too much middle grey.
     
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    Is it sad that the model is me? ;) Hahahaha... anyways thanks... heres an edit though based on the feedback:

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    edit is way better, looks good! Beatiful Model & Photo
     
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    I doubt any of guys are sad about that. The edit is much better.
     
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    Im not sad about it. ;)

    I agree about the exposure. Black and whites really need to have good shadows and highlights and very little middle gray to work well. The lighting looks too flat here.

    Keep trying. Proper lighting is the key. :)

    NJ
     
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    Nice edit, but now you added some speculat highlight at her skin.
    Also her hair is too dark.
     
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    what color are your eyes?

    youre very pretty.
     
  10. MyaLover

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    Awh thank you :) Yes my eyes are really that blue.
     
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    Your arms are cut off at a awkward length. It's not pleasing to cut off at joints.

    The lighting is too flat, you put the the flash too near the camera (on the camera).

    Also your hair is disappearing into the background, especially on the top left.
     
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    For one. Why the fuk is it side ways??
    For two. One is all i had to say because I can't even see it.
     

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